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+Short + +Scene begins with a hardcore rocker chick walking opening a box with a look of utter joy. + +Girl is walking down the street with a doll and hugging it firmly. She looks up from her utter contentment and sees another rocker teen chilling on the side of the street. In dismay she ditches the doll and pretends not to care about anything. The two exchange nods in a too cool way and the girl continues on her way. This time however she seems distraught over the loss of her doll. She glances over and sees it floating down the river. In dismay she chases after it but in the end looses it. The girl is disheartened and continues home. + +Preppy teenage girl looks at the clock at jumps around in excitement. She sneaks out her door and down the hall. She is just to the door when a middle-aged woman approaches her and gives her a quizzical look. The teen turns and grabs a lease off the hook on the wall and points to an overly large dog slobbering outside. With a nervous smile she leaves the house with her dog for a “walk”. + +The teen girl stands by a tree looking anxious. A hand reaches up and taps her on the shoulder and she turns around with a look of pleasure on her face. The hand belongs to a teenage boy about the same age as the girl. The two lock lips (this can be faked if the actors so desire) and have little attention on anything else. Meanwhile… the dog is shown standing along the rivers edge with a look of interest on his dumb face. + +The two teens break apart and sadly wave good-bye. Both keep turning longingly back at each other and doing goo goo couple stuff (director should promote improve). Unknown to the girl the dog has a large water soaked doll in his large drooling mouth. + +At the house there is a zoom out from suitcases showing parents in Hawaii print t-s excitedly dashing out of the house. They don’t even wait to say good-bye but wave as the car speeds off. The woman is the middle-aged mother from before and her husband is balding (he doesn’t have to be balding but it would make it funnier). The babysitter an elderly grandmother figure walks slowly into the house. She surveys the house and sadly shakes her head. She is seen running her hand over the mantle of the fireplace checking for dust. + + +The dog is seen loping around the corner. He lays down on the carpet with his doll and starts chewing. A young child is seen tottering to the dog. He pulls the doll from the dog’s mouth and starts to play with it. The old woman is seen walking into the scene with a broom in had and bats it at the dog until he tiredly gets up and loafs off. The old woman looks down at the child playing atamently with the disgusting doll. With a sniff she picks it up with emphasis in keeping it as far away from her as possible. As she heads to the laundry room she hears a strange noise from the preppy teens girly room. She peaks her head in and finds the girl sitting in her chair playing on the computer. Satisfied she leaves the room without a second glance. With the woman halfway down the hall the teenage boy emerges from the closet. (Hilartious indoenedo) + + Tune it Up! Opening Credits Deserted stadium and football field. Scene 1 Sister: Come on Chris you can’t miss your first day of school be in the car in ten minutes or walk. Chris: Long groan. Start scene with some type of uplifting music. Possibly a well known tune that can carry a beat. Show the sister in the car and camera in chris’s point of view yet not showing chris’s face. Drive to school with the music playing then it stops as they park in the school lot. Sister: I guess this is it. Not much to look at huh? For the first time the camera shifts to see Chris’s face. Its terrified yet his sister is the essence of cool. Chris: I can’t do this. Sister: What? Chris: I can’t go here. Take me home. I need to go home! Sister: No, are you kidding me! I spent my time waiting for you to get ready when I could have been here already. Don’t be a wimp you were fine at our old school you will be fine here. Chris: Really?! Sister: Laughs. No! Gets out of the car and opens his door. Move your sorry butt before I move it for you. Chris: Yeah right! As if you could. Large grunt form the sister as she comically drags him out of the car and into the school. Sister: Have a nice day, loser. Be at the front doors at 2:30 or I’ll leave you here. Sister walks off in the opposite direction of her brother and disappears in the sea of High school faces. Chris: Don’t believe her. You can do this. You did it in New York and you can do it here! I can do it!!! Gets hit by band doors. Knocked onto his back he slowly opens his eyes… There a hot young band student named Cecilia ROSALYN TYPE YOUR SCENE!!!!